Eyes
Eyes view the whole world,
The world around us is viewed,
Even to the blind.
Ears
Ears hear everything,
The never-ending grapevine,
Even to the deaf.
Hands
Touching and holding,
The textures throughout the world,
Those closest to you.
Mouth
Taste-test everything,
sweet, bitter, salty delights,
The Taste bud Dreamland.
Nose
Smell the sweet flowers,
Smell the not-so-pleasant trash,
Smells are everywhere.
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Thursday, April 5, 2007
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1 comments:
You don't have many words with a haiku so try not to repeat anything in them, try to make every line unique and important. They're not bad but they could be better.
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